TUGAS WRITING 3.

Name: Ni Ketut Saptariani.

SRN : 12340021.

Subject : Writing 3.

1.       How to write paragraph with adequate and inadequate cohesion.

                 Paragraph is  a wonderful thing. It lets you quietly change the rhythm, and it can be like a flash of lightning that shows the same landscape from a different aspect."
(Isaac Babel, interviewed by Konstantin Paustovsky in "Isaac Babel Talks About Writing." The Nation, March 31, 1969)

·         An Effective Paragraph Criteria Chart

- has one topic.
- has a topic sentence.
- has supporting sentences that give details or facts about the topic.
- has vivid words.
- does not have run-on sentences.
- has sentences that make sense and stick to the topic.
- has sentences that are in an order that makes sense.
- has sentences that begin in different ways.
- is made up of sentences that flow.
- is mechanically correct--spelling, punctuation, capitalization, indentation.

·         ADEQUATE DEVELOPMENT :

Develop your paragraphs with specific details and examples.  The topic (which is introduced by the topic sentence) should be discussed fully and adequately. Again, this varies from paragraph to paragraph, depending on the author's purpose, but writers should be wary of paragraphs that only have two or three sentences. It's a pretty good bet that the paragraph is not fully developed if it is that short.

·         INADEQUATE DEVELOPMENT :

Inadequate is Psychiatry ineffectual in response to emotional, social, intellectual, and physical demands in the absence of any obvious mental or physical deficiency. Examples of INADEQUATE

1. These supplies are inadequate to meet our needs.
2. We were given very inadequate information.
3. I felt inadequate to the task.
4. Her brother's success and popularity always made her feel inadequate.

·         Cohesion paragraf

COHESION is a state or situation in which all the parts or ideas fit together well so that they form a united whole. Synonym : cohesiveness, coherence Example : There was no cohesion in their performance. The lack of cohesion within the party lost them votes at election time.

2.       Tell more about cohesion.

COHESION is a state or situation in which all the parts or ideas fit together well so that they form a united whole. Synonym : cohesiveness, coherence Example : There was no cohesion in their performance. The lack of cohesion within the party lost them votes at election time.

3.       Write more about the difference between coherence and cohesion.

COHESION is a state or situation in which all the parts or ideas fit together well so that they form a united whole. Synonym : cohesiveness, coherence Example : There was no cohesion in their performance. The lack of cohesion within the party lost them votes at election time.

COHERENCE has two specific meanings/usages. (1) The quality that something has when it makes sense or is pleasing because all the parts or steps fit together well and logically Synonym : unity Antonym : incoherence Example : The stage sets were brilliant and they gave coherence to a piece which was bitty in the second half. The points you make are fine, but the whole essay lacks coherence. (2) A state or situation in which all the parts or ideas fit together so well so that they form a united whole. Synonym cohesion, cohesiveness Antonym : incoherence Example : His arrival threatened the coherence of the group. France's entry enhanced the coherence of the alliance

4.       Show which text or sentence that shows adequate or inadequate cohesion on your paragraph by underlining or putting in the table.

How to Know My Self.

To know my self, you must know, who’s my name, my nick name, when I was born, where I live, what is my hobby, and what the activity that I do when I was  get a free time. My name’s  Ni Ketut Saptariani. All of you can call me Ni ketut Or Sapta. I’m a cheerful girl. Always smile with the other people. I don’t stuck girl. I’m friendly, I very like to help the other  people, I’m so sad if I see the people who need help but there is people want to help, and the last I always try and try to be better from the other people. I live in Metro city, on the small of boarding house on the teladan street 15A Metro city. But my true house in Rumbia. In the best thing about me, I think there is no, because I don’t know what the best think in my self. My hobby is sport like taekwondo, cooking, reading a book or komik, try a new something, and adventure. I do my interest hobby with taekwondo and adventure, because from adventure I can know where’s a good place, and from adventure I can go anywhere and then from taekwondo I can get the knoledge how to keep ourself. I don’t scared with adventure or taekwondo, because the two thing that make me more be brave to face our live and I always think, or For me live is adventure. Get more a good think in our live. My activity in free time is sometime  I get a trafelling but some time I watching a korean movie. In the end, when I go out from my house I can see and feel happy with the world, Because I fell very happy like a bird can fly in the other place so I have a motto in my live “Do something what can you do to get a good something.

Purple : Identification

Red : Description

Blue : Conclusion

5.       You should explain why your text or sentence that you underline is categorized into cohesion.

The underlined sentence called adequate and inadequate cohesion because in the sentence using a connecting word (in the end), and using a conjunction (because) to connect with each other.